Gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solutions do you suggest?
It is indeed a noticeable fact that the affluent people are becoming wealthy by each passing day and poor people are still struggling for the basic necessities. This has increased the gap followed by problems that includes unhealthy education system and unemployment. Are there no solutions to this issues? I would discuss the same in my coming paragraphs.
Undeniably, the education system are becoming privatised ,leading to poor people becoming helpless for their children's admission in quality schools. In addition to this, employment is lower amongst lower class due to lack of proper education.Arent there any government schools for such backward class people? There are government schools but unfortunately, they are staff deprived and have a low number of pupils in schools. This has lead to high number in unemployment. When a poor person get a good qualification and he can secure a good job, thus, fortify his complicated life.
To solve and decrease the gap, the government and the society comprising of rich class should come forward and help the needy to get better education and hence getting a suitable job which would help them to come above the poverty line and give their families a healthy life. Aren't the affluent class responsible for doing a charity? Yes, just a small contribution from them can help a lower class people to upgrade their school and career.
To conclude, the gap between the rich and poor are due to improper education system and unemployment. Still, government and rich class society can contribute and support the needy to overcome their poverty and leading to enhanced growth opportunities to excel in their careers, thus reducing the gap ratio.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82633778151 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9594897301 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106045640282 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417160460326 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495133197235 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747037407073 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428993656963 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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