In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.
Many people believe that the students should be trained not only in the academics, but also in handling the problems of the everyday life. In number of countries, the younger generation are encouraged to travel for some time before they join the university for the higher studies. There are both pros and cons to this strategy.
There are two main advantages, the first one is the self discovery and the other one is exposure to the outside world. When students get a chance to travel, they will have an opportunity to rediscover themselves. Youngsters will be able to identify their strengths & weakness, based on which they might even consider the change in the career path. Most of the younger crowd spend their life under the protection of parents, it abstracts them from the real-world problems. If the students travel, they can get immense learning experience, which make them ready for the future challenges. For example, I never travelled outside the country until I completed the graduation, when I went abroad for the higher studies, I struggled to handle the real world problems on my own. So, I believe, travelling definitely helps.
The are couple of downsides for this, the youth might get addicted to the bad habits and they might even lose interest in pursuing the higher education. There are many instances where the children start doing drugs in the free time and they finally end up in rehabilitation centers instead of universities. For example, one of my friends took a break from studies to spend time on travelling. Initially he was doing good, met new people and went to exciting places, but at the later stages, he lost the purpose and spent most of his time drinking alcohol and smoking.
To conclude, I believe, travelling alone after graduating from the school is like double edged sword. It has to be handled in a right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ouble edged sword. It has to be handled in a right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90506329114 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6240785991 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6315808074 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194169783044 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558278287874 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058524342043 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11737994174 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061470267175 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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