Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Is it advantageous or disadvantageous?
predominantly since a decade or more, everyone is easily able to identify that bigger market vendors are slowly taking over the smaller counterparts. In my opinion this change is advantageous to everyone including end customer and mediocre shopkeepers. I will be trying to prove the same through the below content.
first I would like to highlight that whenever a reputed or bigger vendor enters the marketing arena, along with high paying employment it definitely opens an opportunity of various types of low level jobs too, which usually lacks with small-scale players. latterly mentioned services can be related to security or cleaning or maintenance staff etc. Attaining this the bigger market player adds or boosts the economy of the city or town they are going a part to be.
Not to be forgotten that large malls are also a prominent reason of city's better infrastructure, as they have to build surroundings good enough to attract a regular customer. along with above they also provide ample parking space which I believe cures the problem of road blocks and accidents due to street side parking issues.
Adding to another advantage would be, smaller shopkeepers can have their shops inside those bigger malls to extend better services to their clients or customers, keeping the public hygiene at the top. Again these bigger malls are strategically designed and well-organized to let the air and sunlight flow to every nook and corner, and hence maintaining a healthy environment 24 by 7 and 365 days a year.
Not just from a shopkeeper perspective but these bigger malls help customers too by putting all their competitors at the same place to compare and well choose their options. also not to forget these bigger malls are open mostly till late evenings which gives an added benefit to end customer i.e. not to worry about the timings to reach a showroom after a hectic office day.
Lastly per my understanding and opinion I would say that , bigger malls or vendors are globally beneficial and are a boon to a city or town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96783625731 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70695901228 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4617109345 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127877976659 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430955003817 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416737356104 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624015662656 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176607631062 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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