You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager
• Say what reasons made you choose this airline.
• Something that you liked about the flight
• Suggest an improvement
Dear Sir,
I felt very honoured that you asked for my feedback about recent commuting experience of mine with your airline.It is not only valuable for airline itself,but a blessing for customers also, as people would be able to express their feelings clearly.
To be honest,I have chosen to travel by your flight only because of its cheapest price firstly. Other than that,a friend of mine, John recommend it and appreciated services.
I would like to add that welcome greetings by flight staff was amazing.And,food was not only tasty, but also is appropriate quality. I liked the interior of plane very much.
Additionally, I want to suggest if you could provide reading materials in local language to passengers which may make their journey more enjoyable.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Sparan
- You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager•Say what reasons made you choose this airline.•Something that you liked about the flight•Suggest an impr 56
- some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars,trucks, and motorcycles are banned from city center.people are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses,taxis,and metro on vehicle free days.to what extent do you think advantages overweigh 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I felt very honoured that you asked for ...
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...ng experience of mine with your airline.It is not only valuable for airline itself...
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... is not only valuable for airline itself,but a blessing for customers also, as peopl...
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...their feelings clearly. To be honest,I have chosen to travel by your flight on...
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... cheapest price firstly. Other than that,a friend of mine, John recommend it and a...
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... recommend it and appreciated services. I would like to add that welcome greetin...
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...e greetings by flight staff was amazing.And,food was not only tasty, but also is ap...
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...reetings by flight staff was amazing.And,food was not only tasty, but also is appropr...
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...also is appropriate quality. I liked the interior of plane very much. Additio...
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...liked the interior of plane very much. Additionally, I want to suggest if you c...
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...nk you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sparan
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...nd consideration. Yours faithfully, Sparan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86711643519 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.77037037037 0.622605031667 124% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9819112863 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264890972778 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100416506345 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841403966558 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135154660855 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08712901694 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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