You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to share with you one of my recent achievements that you would love to read.
You would be happy to know that now I am a senior test engineer in the world’s renowned organization, Google. Last month, I got to know from one of my friend about this job vacancy and I did not miss a second to apply for the same. Fortunately, With the grace of word and after multiple rounds of interview I got selected.
My training had already started from this month and I was amazed to see the office infrastructure. The work environment is really professional and the office policies are employee friendly. Along with that they offer us multiple facilities such as free gymnasium, cafeteria that offer multination cusines, chance to attend famous sports events.
Another news that I want to share with you might sound a little depressing, my work location is Ohio and I would move there after my six months of training. Therefore, I invite you to visit my home so that we spend some quality time together prior to my relocation.
Hope to see you soon.
Warm Regards
Harry
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-03 | kamrulshaker | 78 | view |
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- Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... chance to attend famous sports events. Another news that I want to share with y...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
... work location is Ohio and I would move there after my six months of training. Therefore, I...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Hope to see you soon. Warm Regards Harry
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69523809524 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66341638654 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4141751809 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153820958163 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570272580615 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581001474327 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09610907537 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660313937832 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.