Many people think that money to be important for achieving happiness. What importance does money have regarding happiness? Give your answer with relevant examples.
Several people believe that wealth is a primary factor of happiness. This is a very subjective term because money does play a role in making individuals joyful, but it is not the major element for below mentioned reasons.
To begin with, several rich persons buy expensive stuffs that leads to their satisfaction which in turn brings happiness in them. Hence, for many happiness is determined by materialistic possession and are in forefront to collect unwanted things, just to satisfy their hunger. For this category, the primary motive is to live a lavish life, and if they cannot afford to buy certain products, they are sad and dull until they have these stuff in their hands. For example, my cousin was sad on the day he topped in his class, just because his parents did not buy him gift he wanted, but his friend who had just cleared the exam was extremely delighted.
On the other hand, there are instances where an individual is happy because of other activities like donation, helping poor people, NGO services. These people are satisfied, even if they do not get monetary returns because they are happy with these types of work. For example, my aunty was practicing as a child specialist, but after a couple of years she left her practice and started community service because her happiness was in providing free medical service to needy.
To conclude, for some the materialistic possession is the definition for happiness and hence they give primary importance to wealth but for others it is social service brings them pleasure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun happiness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much happiness', 'a good deal of happiness'.
Suggestion: much happiness; a good deal of happiness
...rn brings happiness in them. Hence, for many happiness is determined by materialistic possessi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ared the exam was extremely delighted. On the other hand, there are instances w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94252873563 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58182401424 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8648968392 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170457195599 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666861247936 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420936539891 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110762368882 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398176044377 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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