Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advance in technology, we can deny that our life have been improved a lot since then. One of the popular invention is computers. However, It has provoked a storm of controversy that whether we should consider computers as the most impressed and necessary product over the last century. To the best of my knowledge, I totally agree with this idea.
On the one hand, when computers have been brought to our daily life, we no longer have to use other conventional method to do some tasks that computers can do. . In the past, people had to calculate the number by hand and wrote it down and they could not make sure that if it is precise or not. However, since the appearance of computers, people now can easily see that computers can perform this tasks easily with accuracy. Furthermore, computers also help us to connect with our friends who are living far away from us with almost no cost. For instances, when you go aboard for further study, you can still stay in touch without so much worries
On the other hand, there are many invention which have changed our life recently. one of the outstanding one is the mobile phone. But mobile phone still have some shortcomings compared to computers.To be specific, computers also support for work like design, the ability can not be performed in mobile phone.
In general We have seen a lot of advancement in our life and it also do it best in almost every situation. However, to be multi-tasking like the computer, there seems like nothing can beat hand down the computers

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, for instance, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5551900252 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8129719879 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138244351363 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511857781742 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306118410047 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854858443223 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311904704083 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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