Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences.
To what extent do you agree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the level of punishment that shall be applied on traffic offences can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I strongly agree and believe that we must be considerably restricted with some sort of strict laws to reduce the rise of offences number
There are a number of reasons in favour of my stance. To commence with, Traffic offences are similar to civil crimes severity, and they cause the same catastrophic consequences. It is imperative to note that the traffic offences may lead to partially human’s body loss and it will make a severe lousy situation such as death. As a result of that, the aforementioned discussion shows that traffic offences and different kinds of crimes have the same level of drastic results.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that if the countries have a weak punishment system, the country security global ranking will go down rapidly. First and foremost, when a country security rank is bad, the economy will have huge losses. This exemplifies that a weak system will make many several negative impacts on the community.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, I strongly recommend that the traffic offences shall be considered as one of the worst acts of its wide effect, not only on the one person, but also they have a chronic effect on the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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..., Traffic offences are similar to civil crimes severity, and they cause the same catas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91210916431 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0461508849 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924334828122 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035685536517 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025975907759 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550891873395 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371678368138 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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