People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I reside at the <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="am "></span>54th Baker street and our area uses your internet connection. I am writing you this letter to bring to your notice that from past 2 weeks we are facing connectivity issues which is hampering our day-to-day activities.
Let me explain to you further, Initially, the problem was faced by few people but now majority of the internet user are not able to connect. It's take a long time to open any browser and sometimes it pops up an error which says there is not internet connection available.
we have some small shops like 7/11 and a laundry service, but due to the poor service, workers in the shop are unable to continue with their daily duties. Moreover, the residents are also experiencing problems because they highly rely on online services to pay the electricity bill, order grocery and keep in contact with their friends and family.
I request you to please send your maintainance guys and check the cables around our areas. please consider this matter in high priority.
Looking forward to receive a response from you as soon as possible.
Your Sincerely,
Jane Doe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...s not internet connection available. we have some small shops like 7/11 and a l...
^^
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
... and check the cables around our areas. please consider this matter in high priority. ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...er in high priority. Looking forward to receive a response from you as soon as possible...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14795918367 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5116090864 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.734693877551 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3929770663 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198735925006 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607702014969 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356854629064 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728367389796 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499066648975 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.