Write about the following topic:Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The computer is one of the intelligent creativity of a human mind and is the best innovation of a century. I agree with the statement that a computer is only a real time machine that simulates the real-world problem in an efficient and effective way also noting is impossible with it, The computer these days increases its superiority.
Different machines are been developed in the past 100 years but a computer is a machine developed for reducing task for the human brain. These days due to its creativity and intelligence people choose to perform day to day activities by using it. The banks and many other institutions are eased with taking financial decisions and real-time monitoring of their transactions. It's helping to keep the tracks and reducing the brain complexity, with the use of different algorithms and formula.
Also due to the development of a computer different artificial intelligent machine are created which behaves like human and can operate as human. Such type of machine is a great innovation from a human mind. It's helping to reduce human uses and performing as one of the important roles for different kind of processes. Which are even self-dependent and can compute own task as well as others and are capable of sharing resources. Rather than this no other machine are capable to perform like this so can extend its superiority day by day.
In conclusion, The computer is an outstanding creative and are extraordinary because they are programmed to compute all the real world problems and are simulated for different decision-making tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...of different algorithms and formula. Also due to the development of a computer di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99544772957 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6037133228 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890582812721 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352823539059 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029580425133 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644257624641 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334104363879 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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