Some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree.
There is no doubt that child's life is highly influenced by the parents and I completely agree with the notion that parents up bringing plays pivotal role in child's successful life. This essay will advocate my belief.
Firstly, child spends huge amount of time with their parents during their early age. so, the child's emotional inclination towards the parents are high compare to others. In early days normally child try to copy their parents behaviour in their life so good manner, behaviour,etiquettes and discipline learned in those days will play important role at adulthood to become successful person. Secondly, the children at tender age consider their parents as a role model and try to impersonate themselves as their parents. For an instance, a kid try to copy their parents style of walking , talking or dinning table etiquettes. thirdly, children's brain is at its best learning age whatsoever is learned during these days will stay forever with the children and disciplined learning will definitely leads to the path for success in child's adulthood.
On the other hands, during the teen age, the influence of friends are more compare to parents. In these day child will learn the social behaviour traits such a friendship which will allow child to build better public relations with other during their adulthood. Sometimes children's emotional inclination towards friends are more as they might have working parents. Moreover, adolescence's cognitive learing starts during their primary or secondary school in that case teacher's role is more important.
To conclude, different people like teachers, friends and parents plays important role in children's life at different stages. However, fundamental skills and behavioural traits learned from parents plays most important role for successful adulthood life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44366197183 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72372023029 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.61705972 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202158031017 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793816764293 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678063072757 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141813903922 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643355330134 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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