some people argue that share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that sharing information in terms of scientific research, business and the academic world is beneficial, while others suppose that such data are invaluable to be given prevalent. Although there are some strong arguments against the view of private information, I still believe that it is a necessary policy relative to the development of nations.
There are several reasons why people might argue that publishing precious information in academic fields is worth. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that sharing information is helpful to all people around the world. Scientific research, for example, helps scientists or cosmologists gain new things recognizing others mistakes and solving issues together to demonstrate the correction of the universe, which is helpful for the future generation. Secondly, a vast of people argue that acquiring useful knowledge from developed countries is essential to the development of poor countries. Undevelop countries could mimic the way of companies' managements from other nations, which leads to the economic bomb. Finally, publishing information assists learners realize their own mistakes compared to others, so this helps them to improve their knowledge.
In spite of above arguments, I support the view that some information is too valuable to be shared. The main problem is that if we reveal cost data, it would have a negative effect on our thinking such as deter our solving-problems' mind. We would love to search information which we concern rather than using our brain because it would be faster and easier. Another problem is that scientific research and business play an important role to the economic development of a country, if we are giving out these data freely, other countries could steal these ideas and develop by their own ways, which could be used to defeat former country lately. In my view, it is essential for people and countries to keep valuable information because this prepares a better future for their countries and citizens.
In conclusion, sharing information has its advantages, but I still believe that the drawbacks of it outweigh the confidential information in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35942028986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88506427714 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3426172548 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.071428571 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345822804583 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116504264867 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878907131427 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222557641614 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651851362189 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.