Despite health warning, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world,
why should we be concerned about this?
what solution would you suggest.
smoking is one of the harmful habit, to which most of the people around the world have been addicted. Although there are enough advertisement and video messages that displays health warning related to smoking, still it has become unavoidable habit. In this essay, I will examine the need for concerning about this bad habit and suggest some preventive measures to tackle this issue.
To begin with, Young people start smoking due to status symbol or just for company and later they become addicted to it. Many people misbelieve that smoking relieves stress however they are not aware of later consequences. By smoking cigarettes they are not only putting their lives in danger but also the lives of their loved ones. It has become a great matter of concern these days.
Another major factor that made this concern more serious is that from last few decades, the victims of cancer has tremendously increased. As per New york times research, last year around 12000 people died of lung cancer and unsurprisingly eighty percent of deceased people were habituated to smoking. eople have become so much addicted that they ignore the health warning written on cigarette box or mentioned in advertisements.
Talking about the preventive measures that could be taken to tackle this issue. Rates of cigarette and other smoking items should be inflated so that it restrict the poor people to smoke. Additionally, there should be awareness programs that discuss the hazardous effects of smoking and show the real facts and figures of health adversity by smoking. also Governments should start free meditation and yoga classes so that people have much better option to relieve stress instead of smoking.
To sum up, smoking is one of the habit that not only destroys the smoker but also the people around them. Despite of several health warnings it is common tradition followed by many around the globe. Its harmful effects includes, increased number of cancer patients in last few years. To control this situation, there should be campaigns that showcase the harmful effects of smoking. free yoga service could also support those people who are willing to quit smoking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, talking about, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12394366197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45085639806 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546478873239 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7021189871 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236496802711 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072015005158 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415628648295 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131638286988 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480512263201 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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