Write a letter to the local council about the closure of a playground in your area because children don’t use it much. In your letter say
– Why don’t many children use it?
– How is the playground important for children?
– Give some suggestions how to increase the playground’s usage.
Dear Sir
My name is Erfan and a member of the Second Road distinct. I am writing to inform you that a playground located adjacent Hills Park is out of service.
There is a wide range of reasons that cause youth’s desiring to use them dramatically reduced. Even though this place has a wonderful position in our area, instruments are old fashioned and the shortage of equipment are feeling. Furthermore, the gathering of drug dealers contribute to parent’s afraid that let their child play in this ground. Because of these reasons, children never are drawn to use this playground.
In spite of the summer is coming, there is no place for young people to spend their pleasure time. Besides, most families in this zone are accommodating in an apartment besides there is lack of space for their child to play physical activities. For these reasons, it is feeling crucial to reopened the playground for locals.
I would appreciate it if you could replace equipment with contemporary ones. Also, consider conditions to restore security.
I look forward to your faith
Kind Regards
Erfan Mohammadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir My name is Erfan and a member of the Sec...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are never
...und. Because of these reasons, children never are drawn to use this playground. In spite...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...look forward to your faith Kind Regards Erfan Mohammadi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08196721311 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83612348194 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4374313186 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164637944868 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527994723971 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626773017994 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710537781897 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528155734094 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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