People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less?. What effect does it have on an individually and on society
There is no doubt that sleeping is crucial in human’s life. It is often argued that people today sleep less than before in different countries around the world.
It is obvious that human life became very hectic in comparison to the past. This is because the springing of different industries around the world and also the remarkable development in other domains. These domains require a lot of effort in order to continue its improvement. Sleeping, meanwhile, could be affected as the developing of work might require more working hours. People often tend to work a lot because if they do so, they will get extra wages even if this will contribute of less sleeping hours for them.
lack of sufficient sleeping could lead to two significant effects on human life. Firstly, less sleeping hours can directly cause anxiety. In other words, the researches proved that the human body needs at least 6 to 7 hours of sleeping, otherwise, the brain will not function properly and this will cause a change in the human’s behavior and attitude. Another relevant point is, when people don’t have enough time to sleep, they might become short-tempered and this will create a tense environment. As a result people will be less happy and even small problems between individuals could be escalate quickly.
To sum up, the world we live in now is very busy world and for that reason people are working extra hours to keep up with life. However, this might have a serious impact on the individuals and the society in the sense that people will become less happy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Lack
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Suggestion:
...sense that people will become less happy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, at least, no doubt, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90977443609 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56200180369 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1267329515 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269191982846 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098150829659 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949302489946 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187358005742 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703115076495 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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