Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems?
Almost all schools have bad students who might be very violent to bully other people, or do drugs which bring serious negative influence for everyone. this essay we will discuss why some of teenagers are in poor behavior and how to help them to grow as a good person .
To begin with , I think there are two main reasons why this situation happened . Firstly, due to the internet developing with an alarming rapid , it is super easy to access unsuitable contents for youngster such as paragraph and violence video . A child who does not have correct knowledge to tell which is good for them , which is bad is very easily to be guided to the wrong way . if students watched a movie about doing drugs , they would be inevitably curious which lead them to the regretful direction. In addition to this , students do not know how to deal with the heavily studying pressure from competing to enter into a better university might choose a wrong way to release it .
there is no doubt that we need to solve those issues to promise each child can grow as heathy and happily. First of all , government should set more strict limitation of accessing some specific pages on internet instead of easily confirming that visitors who are older than 18 years . parents also have a role in this to play who need to monitor their children's behavior . At the same time, if more teachers and parents concentrate not only on exams' grades but also on teenagers' mental health , there will be way less poor-beharior students .
In conclusion, teenagers are in a special growth period who are easily go to a wrong road by the bad influence from internet or pressure from studying . but with the government , teachers , parents work together , they will be grow as a good student and a useful person to society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70739549839 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51431040835 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.434537972 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12597277057 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047396957897 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031968307302 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803738704512 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332196621479 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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