should government spend more money on improving roads and highways or, should government spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Use specific reasons and details.
Some people think that the government should spend more money in streets and highways, while others believe that improving public transportation is the most important. But I do believe that both aspects are important and should equally improved.
By public transportation system, people can reach any place easily. Maybe a car can also carry them there, but there are still many people who do not have a car. Children cannot drive, without their parents help. Public transport is the only way they can depend on. Public transport can also save money and is more efficient. Compared to the expenditure on improving the roads and highways , developing public transportation need less money. It also brings people together and communicate with one another.
Roads are the reason of development. In many developed countries there are very high tech and safe roads and highways. For instance, in Germany some highways don’t have any speed limits and this is because of modern engineering and development of highways. This leads to the fastest transportation in the world.
Public transportation can make the travel cheaper and easier. There are many cities around the world that the people can’t travel in their own cars. So in this situation the only solution is public transport. For example government has produced a smart motor cycles in tourist place so that it is easier for people to travel from one place to another.
On a nutshell, I think the government should spend money on improving public transport as well as on roads and highways because it will benefit all people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...spects are important and should equally improved. By public transportation system, peo...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ture on improving the roads and highways , developing public transportation need l...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'techs'?
Suggestion: techs
...developed countries there are very high tech and safe roads and highways. For instan...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cycle'?
Suggestion: cycle
...e government has produced a smart motor cycles in tourist place so that it is easier f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11923076923 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72424839864 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9927185352 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9444444444 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317810565919 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103250229913 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125982789808 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211734566761 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139047344863 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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