2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by tour guide. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Nowadays world becoming small village, people love to travel in different countries or places. People preferred enjoy their free time or holiday with friends and family members at various tourist destinations.
Instated of this, tourist guided companies are developed and able to provide the services for travel lovers. Same as from my point of view people should enjoy their tripe in a group such as with coworkers, college friends or family members by the help or guidance of tourist guide. There were some advantages of taking tour guide, if we are first time visitor for the particular are, it may create some difficulties about visit destination, local culture or language as well. So avoid such a problems, tour guide may be the best options. Basically, the main aim of visitors would be explored about new culture, new places, historical memory etc. likewise, people want some fun and refreshment from their busy life. So, from that scenario tours guides are perfect for led the group and determine the visit site and provide the information about such a place, culture, language and history.
On the other hand, some peoples prefer singe tour rather than group and also don't want tour guide as well. It might be good as a personal point of view but I think it will be boring. I believe, grouping tripe create the opportunity to interaction with different peoples and knowing each other better. Although, without tour instructor can save extra cost, some service provider companies are too expensive it is not affordable for everyone.
As a conclusion, I prefer travelling at a group with tour guide rather than without tour guide, because with it is safe and more informative. Especially country like us which is a landlord country, Most of destination occurs in hilly area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, may, so, well, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03367003367 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56890662588 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 106.607317073 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8869663898 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146704504452 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502943774184 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506022440696 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959922311865 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395604907036 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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