Violence in the media promotes violence in society.
To what extend do you agree?
Media plays a big role in the current world society. I believe that somewhat media influence today;s society to a major extend.
With the technological advancement media has grown to a rapid extent. If there is violence showcased in the media be it television, print or social media it has a greater impact on the society. The advancement of mobile technology has led to an increase in the speed by which a particular news spread or incident which is being published in the media, it quickly trust the sentiments of the people, which in then lead to difference of opinion among the various sats of the society. Therefore, social media now a days plays a vital role in the modern world. Now a day people have access to various sources of media e.g. television, internet, print. therefore news from the different parts of the world gets quickly available to the mass in very short span of time.
Media has to ensure that they are more vigilant about the content of the news or information, which thy are making available to the people. If they shows any sensitive news, it has a direct impact on how negatively people react to it, which in turn leads to commercial tension and clashes among the people. Media also has a social responsibility towards the society. People generally trust the news being spread across different mediums of the media, therefore, media should ensure that the content being published is authentic, and does not hurt the sentiments of the particular section of society.
To sum up, this essay agrees that social media has potential to influence people to become violent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trusts'?
Suggestion: trusts
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., if, so, then, therefore, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8503649635 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61853874611 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507299270073 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6422017355 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186577867225 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786631021563 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639057975566 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120781020704 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307232739061 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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