Many people try to look younger than their age. What are reasons people do this? Do think this is a good thing or bad thing?
In the contemporary society, it has become more and more popular among individuals to give an effort in order to look younger compared to their age. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons behind the tendency and I will demonstrate positive points which belong to this trend.
To begin with, the first and perhaps the most significant reason is current workplaces need the people who have younger looks and well-formed employees rather than old ones. In order to find the work easily which can provide them high salary at convenience organizations, job hopers tend to try to change their appearance to looking younger age. Another possible reason is individuals crave to be owner of more attention among people. For this reason, they can attract somebody’s attention much more by rejuvenation. For example, women always devote their time on looking younger to be beloved their husbands.
In my opinion, looking younger demonstrates beneficial character for people. Firstly, it assist to find good job, admittedly, employers look for young individuals to give a work. For example, the field of service such as reception at organization, stewardess and others need younger employees than aged people. Secondly, people do some sport activities in order to be slim so it strengthens their health. Finally, by looking young, people might be beautiful or slim and these kinds of people are encouraged to do work efficiently.
Notwithstanding, this trend carries out some drawbacks.The first one is individuals might spent much more time or money to reach young looking. Another one is some people accept chemical productions which help to look young. These remedies affect their health.
Taking everything into consideration, there are a number of reasons for being younger among people and from my standpoint, it can bring useful contribution to their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27181208054 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92129272299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7309933225 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309175685484 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975324779798 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426491644011 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165954063375 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051358340874 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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