The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other
reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Gone are the days when people had only worked for their livelihood. With time,
the aspiration from the job has changed dramatically now. Today, people have
various reasons for working for someone or for himself. Ergo, I partly agree with
this statement, and describe my point of view favouring the partial agreement
It is an undeniable truth that it was a time when people were driven only by the
singular objective of earning money. Years back, in most countries people
struggled to make their ends meet. However, it has changed in the last fifty years
The covetous prosperity which was a dream to many has become reality in the
21 century in most countries. The way human psychology has evolved, the
same way their aspirations have changed to. For example, an employee expects
a job promotion not only for money, but also feels that he deserves to move up
the success ladder also
On the contrary, various researches back the notion of people working for job
satisfaction, creativity, and where the talent is harnessed. In democratic
countries, governments have been under immense pressure of maintaining the
equal distribution of income for their masses. This political will or a forced
expectation has enabled people to have a decent livelihood barring in some
countries. This has advantaged the people who are ambitious and with the rare
talent to expect more from the job in terms of satisfaction rather than money
Furthermore, large corporations have also realised that money is not everything
that can buy the talent for their growth. Therefore, they have gone a step ahead
with nurturing the human talent
In conclusion, Acknowledge the fact that money is a definite driver for many, but
not for all on absolute terms. These days, people look at both aspects of intrinsic
and extrinsic values from the job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when people had only worked fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68136297617 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5731331205 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127551739476 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474758032119 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437067431557 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349963944519 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395452150175 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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