In the modern world, money is one of the most important resources. An individual can get almost everything with money. The Most common money source is working. Therefore, a considerable number of people think that employees only work for money that I partially disagree with.
On the one hand, as I mentioned before, money is a significant resource in the existing world. Everything has its own price, and an individual can get if he or she can afford. It can be food, water, clothes, car, internet access, home, proper education, or entertainment. Therefore, people have to work to provide themselves and their families with the all required essential things. All these make money a strong incentive to work.
On the other hand, money cannot be the only reason to work hard. Doing the thing that you do not like for many years just for money makes no sense. In my opinion, satisfaction and aspiration are also significant factors for working. For example, an employee expects a job promotion not only for money but also feels that he moves up the success ladders. Additionally, if a worker loves his job, he does work with the special motivation that affects productivity and mental state positively. Furthermore, nowadays, there are a lot of workplaces that make finding a dream job easier than the past.
To conclude, although money is a significant resource for the modern world, satisfaction and intention are also as important as money. Therefore, I partially disagree with the idea that money is the only reason to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96498054475 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81178418397 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1796019382 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0588235294 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246151115506 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083355256244 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854407834745 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155815012754 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473300859737 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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