In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas.
Why do you think that is?
What problems can this cause?
On the one hand, there are an abundance of possible reasons regarding why rural residents are inclined to move to metropolises and cause rural depopulation. First, whilst joblessness is known as a common phenomenon in the countryside, there are a wealth of job opportunities in big cities. This is so because a myriad of local and international businesses are built up in big cities thanks to the good infrastructure in the urban areas. Consequently, youngsters tend to move to cities to improve their job prospects and climb up the career ladder. In addition, metropolises provide citizens with a great number of facilities such as universities, hospitals, cinemas, and theatres. As such, teengagers are able to pursue higher education at cities in addition to enjoying a wide range of recreational activities such as watching movies on large screens.
On the other hand, this phenomenon could lead to pressing matters for today society. For example, the overpopulation in big cities might give rise to pollution that causes detrimental effects on local residents. Indeed, on the grounds that cities are becoming overcrowded, the number of vehicles is rapidly increasing in order to meet the needs of those immigrants. In turn, these vehicles produce a large amount of exhaust fumes that lead to air pollution. In addition, rural dwellers also empty toxic waste into the environment resulting in water pollution. Furthermore, whilst a large number of immigrants approach metropolises, the living conditions of city dwellers can be affected. For example, there is not enough accommodation and other infrastructure to serve urban citizens. As a results, a lot of people are forced to live in slum areas and many people cannot use the social facilities such as hospitals or education institutions.
In conclusion, there are many convincing explanations as to why there is a growing tendency that rural citizens are moving to urban areas such as fruitful career opportunities in metropolises. However, this is also known as a worrying tendency because this can result in overpopulation and its consequences such as pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...in water pollution. Furthermore, whilst a large number of immigrants approach metropolises, the l...
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Line 2, column 789, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...rastructure to serve urban citizens. As a results, a lot of people are forced to live in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3056379822 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22265575735 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2552746313 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184198370246 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053592898015 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584859254265 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13602802171 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448516989227 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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