Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is true that some commenters suppose that many people just consider sporty activities like the sources of recreation while others argue that sport is vital part of the life. From my perspective, I think beside a leisure activity, sport has a significant role to play within society.
On the one hand, many people interested in sporty activities for entertaining due to several reasons. The most popular reason is that not everyone talented in this major and due to time limitation, people around the world participate in sporting activities everyday because of the sense of relaxation that it brings them. For instance, my family often organize to ride a bike around our town and have picnic outside in the weekend, then we can have time together and bridge generation gap. Furthermore, with people who are under stress period can take their mind off thanks to leisure activities.
On the other hand, sports contribute to numerous usual functions in the society. Firstly, it can hence the quality of people health as a whole. With busy life in the modern world nowadays, people are prone to chronic illness because of sedentary lifestyle such as obesity, stroke or some forms of cancel. However, these pitfalls can be rejected at the first place by simply and short activities and reduce financial burden on revenue of the government spent on healthcare services. Secondly, sports can solidify people patriotism through national or international activities. For example, the football matches of Vietnam national team in the U23 championship organized in China has attracted millions Vietnamese people as well as friends in all around the world, promote the Vietnam’s public image and raise people awareness about their obligations to country.
In conclusion, even though people may only participate in sport for the purpose of leisure, it does also bring a number of important benefits to the society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...orld participate in sporting activities everyday because of the sense of relaxation tha...
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Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sporting activities everyday because of the sense of relaxation that it brings t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18327974277 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75428910931 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7713728931 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9230769231 7.06120827912 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105333669346 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443009746964 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663332532199 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785975846881 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664133408158 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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