People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provide the connection. In your letter • describe the problem» • explain how they are affecting people * • lay what the company should do to help
Dear Sir,
This is to bring to your kind notice that undersingn is a subscriber of your network for internet connection since last week with account number: 987354895.
I have been wondering since a week that today or day after the connection is going to improve but to my utter dismay nothing seems to be working. The problem according to me is likely to be about the internet speed, I do tried to measure the speed and it was really shocking to know that its only 35 kbps while I choosed your network based on my experience with the network in my last posting in Mumbai. However it doesnt seem to be working here in my area.
The problem stated is not only experienced by me but with my collegue as well who stays nearby, and got converted from your competition on my recomendation. Although the same network is working fine in my office location ie Kolkata.
Therefore as per my understanding I think its a issue of tower availability in my area as I went through your tower searching website and was meshmarised to locate the nearest tower, some 5 kms away from my loaction. Hence its my ernest request is to please resolve the issue as early as possible and provide us a loaner setup from the competition as standby, until the issue get resolved.
Regards,
Musa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e network in my last posting in Mumbai. However it doesnt seem to be working here in my...
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Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n my last posting in Mumbai. However it doesnt seem to be working here in my area. T...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m your competition on my recomendation. Although the same network is working fine in my ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...fine in my office location ie Kolkata. Therefore as per my understanding I think its a i...
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Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...erefore as per my understanding I think its a issue of tower availability in my are...
^^^
Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ore as per my understanding I think its a issue of tower availability in my area ...
^
Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ower, some 5 kms away from my loaction. Hence its my ernest request is to please reso...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 223, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...some 5 kms away from my loaction. Hence its my ernest request is to please resolve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, may, really, so, therefore, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57205240175 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63767025976 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9969969361 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112232172637 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452303912603 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413075825978 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782319558187 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281490935511 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.