Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negative effect on their development?
Before dwelling deep into the topic, we must understand the the fundamentals of child development. it starts with visualiztion of surrounding from very young age, when the child is an infant. Now as the child grows in age his/her curiosity also evolves to know things around and what can be treated as entertainment. So the things which are identified as entertaining to any child, the psychology of the child tends to repeat the activity. Majorly such repeated entertaining activities fall under the category of games.
The concept of games also evolved from time to time and indivual, like in ancient times yo-yo and pachisi use to be famous and those games were the early one. Then yo-yo further developed into different types of games like cricket, base ball where we through something for entertaining and pachisi took the shape of chess. However, we understand that the yo-yo, where we have more of body movement while pachisi is something where we have least body movement, both the games have their own followings and we known it across time frame.
Post twenty first century, gaming has taken a new classification that is computer games, mostly preferred by every kid, maybe bacause of the development of technology around us. As childrens from last decade are attractred by computer screens, smart phone to be specific due to the graphics used in games are too tempting to get addicted.
To my opinion anything with overdose is negative for children, even to homo sapiens. Therefore, it is certainly negative to get attached to computer games if its deteriorating the overall development of childrens. Outdoor games are equally important for child physical develoment along with the mental. Hence I would conclude with profound saying, which goes - "Healthy mind dwells in a sound body" means playing computer games may help in the development of children in terms of alertness and IQ but sound body can only be achieved from out door gaming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06481481481 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75998456389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2598422605 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188190021107 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573594268454 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506583227091 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103422283635 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616617166046 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.