Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
Explain why the centre is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear Sir,
I am surprised to hear the news that the local council is considering to close the sports and leisure centre in order to save money. Allow to me explain in detail.
To elucidate me and my family have been using the club facilities for the past 20 years. Most of the social gatherings on important festivals are being hosted in the club as it can accommodate large gatherings in the basement. Additionally, elderly people use the club for doing exercise and yoga activities to rejuvenate their bodies whereas children use it for sports activities like swimming and other indoor games. Lastly, the club provides meeting rooms where the elderly people from the community gather for pass time.
Therefore the club holds a special place for all the residents in the community as most of the people have had a long association with the club. Furthermore, it is the only club within this town hence without it local community will suffer and their life will become miserable as they would not be able to do social gatherings and exercise regularly.
I hope you will reconsider your decision.
Yours sincerely
Sad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am surprised to hear the news that the...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... the community gather for pass time. Therefore the club holds a special place for all ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consider your decision. Yours sincerely Sad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91623036649 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59474665004 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8177967902 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178664138766 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840947112043 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996569695476 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145450365536 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14166704527 0.0580467560999 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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