When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why
physical education plays an integral part in the growth of an individual. it is really important for a school or university to carry out physical education programs and not eliminating them entirely because of shortage of funds. To me, this is important for the following two reasons that I will mention in the essay.
Firstly, during these classes, the children are taught various things which they can inculcate in their life. For example, being part of a basketball, football or volleyball team teaches the person a lot about the teamwork, handling failure, leadership and how to work with strength and weaknesses of their peers. When I played basketball in my school, I was an ace player and one of the team member who was also my friend wasn't so good at it. I helped her out learning the tricks and helped her with the sport because it just felt right.
Secondly, PE aids the individual in maintaining high quality health. To this day, my father has an exceptional mental and physical wellness owing to the fact that he played Cricket. I know for a fact, that the importance of sports has been emphasised by science way too many times. sports assists in increasing not just our memory retaining power, but also boosts confidence and relieve stress. it is a known truth that an individual engaging in games is known to have great capacity to learn and memorize something quickly.
For these reasons, I strongly think that despite lack of funds, physical education should not be removed beause it brings about mental health and build personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88301886792 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61924851783 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5786823163 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111531007137 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337215414129 0.0996497079465 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459384071508 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777578589713 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561463178132 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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