Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?

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Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?

English is one of the most spoken language of the world. English is also considered as the second language which people use to communicate in almost all countries. Increase in tourism also contribute to the fact that language is not a barrier nowadays because people who are not native English speakers, can communicate with one another using English as language. In this essay, we will discuss the negative and positive aspects of English as the only spoken language globally.
Firstly, we will discuss the positive impact of English as only spoken language. Every country or even every state has their native language speakers. In traditional world it was always a barrier when it comes to communicate with citizen of different countries. For instance, a native French speaker will not be able to speak Spanish, which will make difficult for him to communicate with Spanish speaking citizen. English is one of the languages which is spoken, taught and used for communication in every part of the world. People travelling to different states on vacation or for business purpose, nowadays use English to establish connection. So, this is used as one of the biggest advantages.

Secondly, we will throw some light on the negative outcome of English as only spoken language. English plays crucial role when it comes to communicate. Moreover, it removes language barrier though it forces the citizen of a state or country to forget the tradition and custom which lies in language. Moreover, people forgot the history behind their native language. Hence, it is said English as only spoken language can be a disadvantage as well.

To conclude, I would say English should always be used and taught as second language in countries which are not native English speakers. People should stick to the tradition in which they are brought up.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...red as the second language which people use to communicate in almost all countries....
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion and custom which lies in language. Moreover, people forgot the history behind their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08278145695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65964131855 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450331125828 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9875336201 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.012033647197 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00512338177293 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00996287876992 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0118640361192 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115456137172 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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