Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
museum and art galleries represent the glory of particular nation therefor, some people tend to believe that in future museums and art galleries desapear due to influence of computers because historical work and objects have seen at home. I totally disagree on this stetment and to support my view i will give some reason for this.
To initiate it, to justification of notion, public art galleries and museums reflect the history of particular country. First of all, these are the places which collect our ancesters achievement and expirences thus we can not understand it properly by seeing them on just computer screen and also we can not bild atmosphere like these places. In museums and in galleries spectacular can enjoy real stuff from encient time and it can be tengible in some museum therefor, it not ever happen on laptop or in moblie phone. For instence in Ahemedabad, gallery people can get glimpse of king sword and can touch it. secondly, paintings, handicrafts, scince discoveries, ancient things and many more stuffs have been exibited in modern governmet and public museums that contain better quality of vision and decoration thus, it would be best to visit it by physically.
However,on the other flip side of coin, individuls who do not have enough time they tend to say that it would be better for them to stay at house and just take look on laptop desk. Moreover, foreigner who can get visa for nation for whom its beneficial to wacth artwork. secondly, in this modern era every on has electrical appliances hence, for them it is most preferable way to search museums and art galleries and enjoyment of unique modules and so on.
To sum it up, museums and galleries shows haritage and ancient culture therfor, it will still popular among masses. In my opinion these type of glorious things will never ever disappear.
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also, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58933101563 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3697242584 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324146606031 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108430666598 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757613902126 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187799798895 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105724283059 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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