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It is widely accepted that our world is changing so quickly and there are so many factors that can effect on people’s happiness, a vast majority of people are of the opinion that changing is the most important factor and it can decrease their happiness.
Some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe not only changing is a great thing for world but also it always satisfied people’s feelings. I contend that changing always is not a good happening. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that in the past people always gather together for saw each other and they spent all the time of meeting for each other but today people when gather together they are always working with their phones and they are busy because they getting amused with their cyber space for example last Friday when my family went to my grand moms house I mentioned that in the middle of dinner no one can talk with others because each person had a phone and their heads are on them and they don’t mentioned that may be hurt grand moms heart.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting my opinion is that today’s people are more crowded because changing to quickly is caused that almost many people have many works to do and there is wide majority of aspects that each person with so many different carriers to do. For example, since the beginning of 1890 the computer did not invent so the people with the related works to computer had not any work related to that and they had more time for spent on agriculture and they had a happy life.
The last but not the least point is that hard work people have less time to spend on their entertainment and they are allaying unhappy and the changing in the word effect on people’s free time so they must be having unhappy life.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that maybe changing not always a good thing that happen for people and sometimes we have to concentrate on our happiness because we cannot stop the changing and we need a life full of happiness for having a good feeling.
However, that was a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are a myriad of other reasons and examples supporting this issue which are not mentioned here due to the dearth of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'moms'' or 'mom's'?
Suggestion: moms'; mom's
...apos;t mentioned that may be hurt grand moms heart. Another equally noteworthy poin...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ity of aspects that each person with so many different carriers to do. For example, since the ...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ry in a nutshell. Actually, there are a myriad of other reasons and examples supportin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62945368171 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4472360284 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44893111639 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.417900608 48.9658058833 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.181818182 100.406767564 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2727272727 20.6045352989 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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