The local council in your city has no funds for repair and maintenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of the council. In your letter
Explain why the building is important
Suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community
Suggest a solution to finance the repairs
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am penning down this letter to express my disappointment regarding the construction of a software company at the place of our ancient building. It is seems as a abolishment of our culture and rituals.
This building plays a vital role in everyone's life of our area from our childhood to till now. It depicts our traditions and customs and natural beauty due to which, numerous tourist attraction helps not only raise funds but, provide job offers to local community and mushrooming our society. People can show their talent or skills by handmade crafts and artefacts that's; a great source of income.
There are various ways by which we can raise funds to protect it as; takes help from higher authority moreover donation for social cause from our area. Secondly we might take a loan from banks. We hope you should rethink about your decision. I hope would receive an affirmative response from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely
Vandana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am penning down this letter to express...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of our ancient building. It is seems as a abolishment of our culture and rituals....
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...skills by handmade crafts and artefacts thats; a great source of income. There are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62702009279 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746913580247 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3643387028 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881584227885 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357828661103 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315987273025 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463597204893 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00907421884271 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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