Rich countries should not employ skilled labor from poor countries, as poor countries need the workers more.
Do you agree or disagree.?
Many argue that developed nations should stop inviting skilled workers from underdeveloped countries because poor countries need them more. I completely agree that wealthy countries should not hiring experienced workers from financially weak nations. I will discuss my opinion further in this essay.
Firstly, rich countries already have latest technologies and achieved a level of advancement. They are becoming more and more wealthy day by day, due to having large number of trained workers. On the other hand, poor countries are still struggling for basic amenities due to lack of finance and advanced technologies. They do not have as many experienced workers, like wealthy countries.
Secondly, there are many opportunities within poor countries because, the scope of improvement is vast. The skilled workers from poor countries could use their skills in developing the nation rather going to developed countries. Also, rich countries should have some laws about not to hire skilled workers from some poor countries.
Thirdly, financial weak countries should provide high wages to retain highly trained workers in their home country. So, they can work on developing their country rather doing job in rich countries. This will help poor countries to grow financially and technically. However, skilled workers prefer to work in wealthy countries because they offer better services and high pay grades.
To put it in a nutshell, I can say that wealthy countries should avoid hiring from poor countries. Also, financially weak countries should make some laws for highly skilled workers to provide high salary than developed countries. Moreover, they can provide better employee benefit plans to retain highly skilled people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hire'
Suggestion: hire
...agree that wealthy countries should not hiring experienced workers from financially we...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...say. Firstly, rich countries already have latest technologies and achieved a level of ad...
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Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...n developing the nation rather going to developed countries. Also, rich countries should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56603773585 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67218309211 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6711904964 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48353121774 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172605725517 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109906325698 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307295896568 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943266402978 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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