Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft.
What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people
and businesses to take?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own
experience.
Cybercrime is a cause of widespread concern today, as so many people use technology to
store and transmit sensitive data. There are a number of problems that people suffer as a result of
these crimes, but also some straightforward measures we can take to protect ourselves.
Perhaps the worst problem stemming from this is the financial impact. If someone has his or
her bank account emptied, or has false credit lines created under their name, they are potentially
liable for large sums of money. Even if they can avoid the consequences, their bank or finance
company has to cover the losses, which can damage their performance. A further problem is the way
in which these stolen funds are used to subsidize other crimes, such as drug distribution or even
terrorism. Once the money enters the criminal networks, we have no way of knowing how it will be
used. Finally, there is the problem of anxiety and stress caused to the innocent victims of these crimes.
The initial shock is often followed by months or years or legal wrangling, paperwork and a sense of
insecurity.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to improve personal
security, ranging from passwords to the shredding of documents. This denies the criminals the raw
materials to work with. Secondly, we should raise awareness of the risks among the elderly or the
very young – two groups who are often specifically targeted – via publicity and public education.
Ultimately, however, it is the financial companies who can make the greatest contribution, by
increasing their security and detection systems – ideally in partnership with the police.
Overall, the problems caused are both financial and social, and the solutions should involve
coordinated action by individuals, corporations and the state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'credited'.
Suggestion: credited
... her bank account emptied, or has false credit lines created under their name, they ar...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25510204082 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80569363864 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1495186334 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887493995628 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272853468156 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293509663594 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243104054456 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031597717836 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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