the graph below shows Uk acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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the graph below shows Uk acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

The given illustration represents the data on UK acid rain emissons of 4 distinctive fields, measured by million tones, 1990-2007.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that all the features witnessed downward trends except transport and communication which increased slightly.
Moving into analytical details, it is quite clear that transport and communication as well as domestic emissions have lower indications than remaining 2 trends. Both of them, started around 0.7, remained stable by 1999. And then, indication of transport rose slightly, though, it finished at 0.7 in 2007. domestic emission decreased steadily and finished at 0.3.
The others, electricity gas and water supply together with other industries saw sharp falls during the period in question. emission of electricity, gas and water supply which stood just under 3.5 in 1991, dropped sharply by 1999 to a million tone. After that despite increasing minimally, it then proceed falling down till 0.5. Similarly, emission of other industries remained stable between 1991 and 1993 above 2 million tones, then started dropping continiually. it finished at approximately 1.2.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Domestic
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Suggestion: Emission
...rp falls during the period in question. emission of electricity, gas and water supply wh...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'proceeds'?
Suggestion: proceeds
...t despite increasing minimally, it then proceed falling down till 0.5. Similarly, emiss...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...es, then started dropping continiually. it finished at approximately 1.2.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57714285714 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87990929562 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8492238305 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145842691709 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562854094109 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847629007585 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105600861194 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10421050749 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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