Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that traveling to foreign countries is more beneficial. In contrast, there are those who belief that traveling to other countries have more benefit. I, to a great degree, agree the second group of people. In my point of view, creating job opportunities, self-recognizing, and spending less money are the three reasons.
The first and foremost reason is that when the people of a nation decide to spend time in their country, automatically, a lot of job positions are created within country. Todays, the high rate of unemployment is remarkable over the world, and unfortunately this is so high in my countries due to the fact that there are a lot of heavy sanctions in my country on behalf of other countries. Therefore, this issue, in other word this crisis, is so vital for us, and we under any circumstances must not cross beside this problem without considering and finding solutions.
The second reason which should be taken into consideration is that it is better first me spend free time to recognize ourselves. In the words, we must pay attention to our cultures and our beautiful places that there are around us, while we are unaware of them. take me an example, I admit that I have not seen the half of the picturesque and historical places in my country regarding to the fact that I am always traveling to diverse places in my country.
Finally, the third reason is being beneficial with terms of the costs. traveling to the other countries costs so much for us during improper economic conditions. I have to point out the sanctions again that there are at the being of time. For this reason, the value of our currency has been dramatically decreased and if we decide to go on a trip toward other countries, we must sell all the properties so that we could stay a few days in oversea.
In short, all the mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that traveling within our country has a lot of benefits for our nation. with the pity I conclude my argument on this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, while, in contrast, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71267605634 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7846548651 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8115754357 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177056518128 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06539595422 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588225016602 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110904013757 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460582151079 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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