The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The following pictures compare the differences between the appearance of Islip town center nowadays and in the future.
Overall, there will be more infrastructure and some areas are going to disappear for those replacement.
Firstly, the dual way for carriage will encompass the town center. Besides, the main road will be used for just pedestrians only. At the present, there are two ranges of shops locate on two sides of the road. However, one of them will be demolished to build the bus station, shopping center, car park and a new housing from West to East respectively.
Furthermore, the old housing will be removed to the West of the remained shops while in the East area of it, the park will become smaller for building another housing. After all, the school and housing outside the dual way will still remain their locations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this replacement' or 'those replacements'?
Suggestion: this replacement; those replacements
...d some areas are going to disappear for those replacement. Firstly, the dual way for carriage wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59900183791 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7059072782 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123297881533 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615508776803 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573171444626 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820380292395 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421705138865 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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