While parking his car in the lane outside your home, a neighbour has caused some damage to your car. You have decided to write to this neighbour.
Write a letter to him/her. In the letter:
say why you are writing
describe the damage caused to your car
say how you feel about this problem and suggest what actions he/she should take about it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Gordon,
I am writing this letter as I wanted to draw your attention to an issue which has been bothering me for some time now. Having lived close to each other as two good neighbours for a long time, we didn’t really have much of an issue to complain about. But, this time, I am afraid, I am whining about the damage caused to my car.
The other day, I found out about a big scratch on my car, leaving me wondering about what might have caused it. Then, later that day, my sister told me that she had seen you parking your car very close to mine and somehow leaving a big scratch on it. The scratch is deep and every time I look into it, I feel sad!
Now, I can completely understand the fact accidents can happen anytime and anywhere no matter how hard we try to avoid them, and I am sure that you didn’t cause the damage to my car willingly. In fact, the same could happen to me as well. So, my suggestion to you would be to exercise a bit more caution when passing by another car or parking near the house where another car is already parked.
I hope that you will pay heed to my good-neighborly advice to avoid such unwarranted situation in future.
Sincerely yours,
Joseph Wong
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| 2019-06-12 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-12 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ice to avoid such unwarranted situation in future. Sincerely yours, Joseph Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, then, well, i feel, in fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33187772926 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34026100487 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8857010948 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247255496482 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839834637856 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536345020989 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127664844249 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575308326527 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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