Your friend delivered a baby girl. Congratulate on this good news and write how you feel. In your letter Explain your situation about your inability to see her in person.
In your letter
- Say how happy you are on this news
-Explain your situation that you could not attend this important occasion
-What gifts you have bought for her
Dear Malvika,
This morning Sid from our peer group revealed me the news of you becoming a mother and delivering a little angel. I am honestly elated with the news and on cloud nine since I came to know about this news.I just cannot wait to meet you but my business trip starts tonight and would be away for next 2 weeks.
As I mentioned this news made my day. At the onset I would like to welcome you to the phase of Parenthood. I am sure you will be enjoying this phase to the core and you and your husband I am sure will be the coolest parents ever.
I am quite sad that I could not meet you as my much awaited Africa trip finally got approved and I am travelling to Nairobi tonight for next 2 weeks. This would allow me to meet you not before 1st of July.
To convey my best wishes I am handing over a Babyshop Hamper to Sid as he plans to come to meet you tomorrow with the entire office group, I am sure this would be of great use to you on daily basis for the baby.
I am looking forward to land back and head straight to your home to meet you. Once again accept my best wishes and all the best for a beautiful journey of parenthood ahead.
Kind Regards,
Jas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Malvika, This morning Sid from our peer group revealed me the ...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am honestly elated with the news and on cloud nine since I came to know about th...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ne since I came to know about this news.I just cannot wait to meet you but my bu...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me to know about this news.I just cannot wait to meet you but my business trip st...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and would be away for next 2 weeks. As I mentioned this news made my day. At t...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To convey my best wishes I am handing over a Babyshop Hamper to Sid as he plan...
^^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to landing'.
Suggestion: to landing
...s for the baby. I am looking forward to land back and head straight to your home to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, honestly, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11587982833 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07052967852 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.461634273 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1818181818 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21489386657 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876405805146 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583993144807 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127569227694 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498787783804 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.