Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
While companies work in the environment of local communities, some people believe that they should benefit the society by introducing sports and social activities for the residence. In my opinion, I completely agree that because it will benefit both to develop.
Firstly, various utilities are shared by companies such as land, water and electricity with villages, therefore they should do a favor by incorporating some social activities. Companies construct factories near to agricultural land to get the benefits of their crops as a raw material for them and take various resources for the manufacturing units to produce products. Thus, such companies must involve local people by introducing games and cultural activities to boost youngsters. For instance, Nestle in Punjab India use cow milk through various local venders to manufacture their products and in return they provide facilities like medical checks ups for their animals and conduct awareness camps.
Secondly, social gathering with local community will boost the moral of organization. Most of the employees are local workers for many organizations, therefore introduction of such activities will provide the platform of family gathering in between different employees and create an emotional family bond between organization and its employees. For example, yearly games conducted by the organization allow employees to divert their minds from professional tasks and villagers get entertain by watching such games.
In conclusion, organizations are using various facilities of the local community therefore it becomes the duty of the company to develop the local society as well as entertain them via introducing various public activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70703125 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01950598308 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9193288787 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.1 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289702010501 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108679164007 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648733843811 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171639766396 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629870124849 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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