It is important to consider whether commercial companies should provide support to the local communities or not. Although some people think that government ought to be responsible for helping these communities, I disagree with that view. In my opinion, business companies can open numerous doors to opportunities by conducting sports and public events.
To begin with, companies can reap a good number of benefits by organizing sports events. Firstly, they serve as a massive platform for marketing and promotion. This is because sports have a unique ability to unite people regardless of their age and status, which can be taken as an advantage by multinational corporations for advertisement of their products. For instance, coca cola and Pepsi are two soft drink companies that often arrange local cricket or football tournaments. This may initially seem like a loss-making approach for them; however, both of these enterprises make huge revenues by sponsoring such events. Therefore, promoting sport events can potentially become a goldmine for companies.
Likewise, undertaking programs for social welfare would bring about countless benefits for companies. In other words, it helps to break the negative attitudes of people toward business companies, which develop due to the sole profit-making policy of some notorious firms. Take, for example, a multinational organization provided prosthetic equipment to some disabled persons in Bangladesh, and in turn, received compliments and admiration from all corners of the world. Moreover, a thriving community is essential not only for carrying out business but also for ensuring cooperation from the society. If the companies decide to support the local community, then this will help them to build up a better brand image for themselves.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that apart from running businesses, companies should sustain the local communities by providing them with sports and social services as such action would enable them to dominate the trade market as well.
- With increase population and even growing urban centers many countries are losing their natural beauty spots What benefits are there to protect places of natural beauty How can this be solved 95
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this can not be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion 96
- Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- For centuries important parts of education have remained such as reading writing and maths With the advent of computers some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list To what extent do you agree 87
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming To what extent do you agree 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58520900322 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01403340898 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646302250804 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5156604453 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283932076229 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950695937546 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649137853933 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184998636818 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027260561592 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.