Due to human activities on land and in the sea, the animals are becoming extinct. What are the reasons and Solutions?
Currently, many of animal species are becoming endangered in both terrestial and coastal areas. This is mainly caused by the increasing number of people eating fish and the development of housing areas. Therefore, fish extensive farming and establishment of vertical house are the practically implemented solutions to solve those issues.
Two ways of human activities disturbing animal habitats in the land on sea rea the demand of fish consumption and shelters. As fish is well known for its high protein contents, more people seem to be considered to consume fish regularly in the great amount. This gives rise to the number of people eating fish more healthily as well as living longer. The more people live longer, the more houses they need. For example, People in Taiwan who have the highest fish-consumed per capita in the world and doubled the population since 1990 experiencing fish-shortage and housing problems.
What can be done to tackle these issues? Two major effective solutions are to adopt fish extensive farming as well as build vertical houses. The reason for this is to sustain the group of fish in coastal areas getting a dramatic decline due to a significant demand of fish consumed. What is more, vertical housing is believed to minimize the use of lands caused/led/given rise to by overpopulation massively requiring more shelters. Having the same problems, the government of Indonesia in 2015 has successfully found solutions by developing fish extensive farming and vertical housing.
To sum up, since the animals in both land and coastal areas are having a dramatic decline in number because of the sky-rocketing fish consumption and new residential area needs, Government in the world urgently needs practical solutions. It is essential for them to maintain sustainable for fish by creating a large number of fish extensive farming and building range of vertical housing. If the solutions are failed to be accomplished by the governments, then many of the animals can be extinct in this decade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22018348624 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93753133276 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2076804868 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162946581151 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563465080855 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654186275718 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956784952561 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213108858774 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.