Your sibling has sent you a letter asking for an update on your life.
Write a letter to your sibling. In your letter:
– Describe what you did for your last birthday
– Ask for photos of your sibling’s last holiday
– Talk about something you are looking forward to
Dear Saran,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you, Kavitha and kids well. Thanks for your last letter.
It gave me a good laugh to know that juniors played a good prank on your last holiday.
Thanks for your wishes for my birthday, I had gone out with my friends to nice restaurant and late night bar and had a great time. It was such a pleasant evening with good food and many drinks. We had almost spent 3 hours chatting after long time and Had to take off from my work next day due to hang over.
Enough about me, I was delighted to know that you and kids had one hell of a time in during your last holiday in Spain. Please do share all the pictures you have taken there and don’t forget to include the funny mustache picture that kids drew on you.
I am very much looking forward to join you and kids during my winter holidays, let’s plan some nice little trip, if possible. I’d love to see some nearby places with you.
Can’t wait to hear from you.
Best regards,
Bala
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-17 | Gunjan Pratap | 47 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 32, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to joining'.
Suggestion: to joining
... you. I am very much looking forward to join you and kids during my winter holidays,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38624338624 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98444441905 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0359695436 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322679594351 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121304335508 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128704319732 0.0603063233224 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174347666254 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113432587403 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.