You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Mohan,
I heard about your accident on road through Rajesh. I hope you will recover soon from this incident. I am writing this letter to explain you about the last weekend match with Nepal cricket team, the one which you missed due to the injuries. You will be glad to know that, we won the match with 35 runs in hand.
Although, the weather conditions were not good to play a high score match due to the cloudy day, we won the toss and played 1st innings and scored the total of 280 runs. On the other side, this time Nepal team was not able to play a good batting which results with the overall total of 245 runs only. And at the amidst of second inning, the sun start shinning which also helped us to take the wickets quickly and restrict their total batting line up on early stages.
I and the whole team are excited after winning the trophy, however, your absence was difficult to manage during the game and even at the time of celebrations. Thus I decided to write you and to make you feel proud on our team.
Get well soon buddy, the whole team wants you to see on field as early as possible.
Best regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u will recover soon from this incident. I am writing this letter to explain you a...
^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e and even at the time of celebrations. Thus I decided to write you and to make you ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d as early as possible. Best regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...possible. Best regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34418604651 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96885429536 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8587101111 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34763858514 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118004402395 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917406900766 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192691396258 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926582570381 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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