you are moving with your family to a new city.write a letter to a housing agent in that city about accommodation.
-explain why and when you are moving.
-describe where you want to live
-state the type of accommodation you require.
Dear Mr.Patel,
I am writing to inform you that we are a very reputed middle class family and we are looking for accommodation near our job place.
To commence with, I and my wife got a job in TATA company in nadiad city and it is 50km far away from my village so we are migrate from my village to new city. I am moving on first date of next month because I have some work to do at home so before moving there I want all work finish.
I have two children with me so we are looking for 2 BHK apartment with cheaper rate and everything included in it.please make sure it is near our job location which is convinient for us. we will use public transport as we don't have a car so found an apartment which is near transit stop.
I hope, you will undestand my situation and attain positive reply from your side.
yours faithfully.
Kishan Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Patel
Dear Mr.Patel, I am writing to inform you th...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Patel, I am writing to inform you that we are a...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for accommodation near our job place. To commence with, I and my wife got a jo...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'migrated'.
Suggestion: migrated
...50km far away from my village so we are migrate from my village to new city. I am movin...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h because I have some work to do at home so before moving there I want all work f...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...moving there I want all work finish. I have two children with me so we are lo...
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Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...ren with me so we are looking for 2 BHK apartment with cheaper rate and everything includ...
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Line 6, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure it is near our job location which is convinient for us. we will use public tr...
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Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... us. we will use public transport as we dont have a car so found an apartment which...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ublic transport as we dont have a car so found an apartment which is near transit...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... apartment which is near transit stop. I hope, you will undestand my situation ...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rtment which is near transit stop. I hope, you will undestand my situation a...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ttain positive reply from your side. yours faithfully. Kishan Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25308641975 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34617441162 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6896562439 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131909159421 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564993432856 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456333199885 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888156825454 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451358848668 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.