Some people believe that research into family history is useful for the next generations, while others claim that present and future are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is essential to gain knowledge by researching to build a brilliant future for the coming generations. Performing research into family history is thought as a suitable method by some folks while performing research in the present and future of circumstances of life are considered as an essential method by others. Personally, I support both points of view, and I discuss both sides of the argument in this essay.
Undeniably, studying present and future circumstances of life gives us a clear guideline to provide a suitable life for the next generations of the family. For example, some people would decide to migrate to another country by knowing that the destination country will provide high-quality services for health and education for its citizens. Moreover, some may find it crucial to save money to be able to send their children overseas for studying when they perceive that the job market hires only those who are graduated from abroad universities.
However, people should not overlook to study about the history of their family because it helps them to know and share the values and achievements of previous generations that assist the coming generations in believing in themselves and dreaming big about their future.
To sum up, while the studying present and future help to decide wisely, for instance, to decide either to migrate overseas or not, and saving money for sending kids abroad to study, it is also essential to share the stories about the achievements and successes of previous generations to coming generations to inspire them to pursue their dreams and make them come true. I recommend that both views should be considered to make wise decisions for life and motivate the next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15957446809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8090657808 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0079573755 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276766230368 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118942865502 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485417024324 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162999473137 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811837497399 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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