In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people thing that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, it is observed from different societies, there are numerous misdeeds, which are being attempting by adolescents. Owing to which, some masses believe that adolescents should be punished as the adults are. I , however, believe that, if they committed crimes like murders and rapes, in such cases, they treat alike elders.
To begin with, crime rate of teenagers are escalating day by day.Firstly, parents are accountable for teenagers misdoings. Parents should aware the children about, consequences, of such misdeeds.Due to lack of employment,they start pursue criminal venture. For instance robbery, burglary and so on, in order to accomplish their daily belongings.Thus, for such kinds of criminals, they should not be treated as adult's punishments. Even, they will sent into reforming community centers ,where community members try to rehabilitate them.
Secondly,imprisonments are,just like, universities of crimes and criminals inside the prison are teachers, who pushes them in wrong direction. Adolescent who sets free from jail after completed the punishment of minor crime , will do serious delinquencies,thus,reforming community centers better for them .However,if someone commit serious crimes,for example,murder and rapes, then they should be punished as adults like death penalty,if we want to terminate upcoming generation for doing such kings of activities.And, we should teach them some lessons based on such activities inside school premises ,which aid them to be cleared more.
To conclude, no doubt, adolescents reside in their early years, but they should understand regarding pros and cons of such activities.Otherwise,regardless of age ,they should be treated according to be their attempted crime.
- In some societies,the numbers of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age,teenagers who commit major crimes should be receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people thing that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86561264822 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7992815849 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.031898153 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.4 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18128506323 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714563143745 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454762429366 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113012864833 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206294449296 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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