Some people think that good health is the basic human need. Therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
According to some, one of the fundamental human need is to maintain good health, leading to a suggestion of not allowing business companies to take care of the medical service. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the advantages of letting private sector for providing medical service are greatly outweighed by the disadvantages it may bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of private companies taking care of the public health. As the profit-making is the prime concern of privately owned companies, there would be proper management in hospitals and therefore, people seeking medical treatment would get better care and facilities so that increasing number of people take medical help from private sector and profit-making is assured. Additionally, capitalists would be encouraged to invest more in public health and hence, adequate number of hospitals and diagnostic centers will be established and proper medical services will be ensured for greater portion of people.
Nevertheless, despite having above advantages, I believe the disadvantages would outweigh the benefits. If profit-making companies look after health sector, cost for treatment would be exceptionally higher and a significant number of people from limited financial background will remain excluded from receiving basic medical care due to expensive medical service. For example, numerous diabetic patients would not be able to afford their routine blood-sugar monitoring. Another obvious reason in support to my opinion is that, there would be shortage of doctors who will be willing to work for government hospitals as they will be paid higher in private hospitals. This will also create obstacle in ensuring health facilities for poverty-stricken people.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of private companies running the medical services such as providing better services and sufficient number of medical institutions, I think the drawbacks like excluding large number of people due to expansive services which is against the basic human rights greatly outweighs the advantages it may bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65830721003 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98796898381 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2798145231 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.416666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356118726938 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119852424211 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814138664437 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231604638288 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527942252172 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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