Success people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The desire of being successful is one of the greatest part of our lives. Although this relies on many different things, the ways which people attempt and do their work are the most important part of success path. Some people believe that success people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Others disagree. In my view, people who only do what they know how to do well are more successful than the others for two important reasons.
First, we can save more time by doing our work in the way which we have experienced it before and we have enough knowledge about it. When you intend to do a range of tasks which close you to your aim, you can do more things in a period of time if you do them in the way which you know how to do well. For example, last year I had a short time to get prepare to my Spanish exam. However it was not my native language and I’ve never faced with it before, I didn’t take risks to choose new way for preparing and I studied for it as I had studied for my another foreign language exam three years ago and finally, I passed it successfully. As you know, if I had chosen to study on a new way, I have lost at least two weeks of my whole twelve weeks to just get familiar with the way.
Second, when you decide to do things on new ways if you get confused in the middle of your way, you may not be able to distinguish the right way from the wrong one as well as you have not had any similar situation in your past life to get help from them. For instance, when I was a teenager I lived in a village that was surrounded by mountains and my father and I climbed one of those mountains every Friday. The way which we climbed was safe and we knew it very well. A day we decided to take a new way and after four hours we reached a steep cliff which we were not able to pass it. Not only did not we reached the top of mountain, but also got lost. As we could not find the right way, we had to call emergency station to help us to get rid of that terrible situation. This experience taught me that how trying a new way can be risky and face you with difficulties and also led you to being got stuck in the middle of the way of your advancement.
In sum, whether you save your time and act sufficient by choosing the way which you are familiar with it or avoiding to try a risky way which may confuse you in the middle of your way and lead
you away from your chief purpose, the way that you try in order to get successful is very important part of your success path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t of our lives. Although this relies on many different things, the ways which people attempt a...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o your aim, you can do more things in a period of time if you do them in the way which you kno...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...time to get prepare to my Spanish exam. However it was not my native language and I&apo...
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Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks choosing'.
Suggestion: risks choosing
...aced with it before, I didn't take risks to choose new way for preparing and I studied for...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding trying'.
Suggestion: avoiding trying
...e way which you are familiar with it or avoiding to try a risky way which may confuse you in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, you know, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0396039604 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15062268279 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425742574257 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1550044332 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7058823529 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353400459346 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130708137216 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18286509389 0.0737576698707 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223594552236 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180499463511 0.0645574589148 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 58.1214874552 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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