Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is witnessed that the majority of tourists visiting museums and historical destinations are foreigners instead of local people. Firstly, this essay will discuss the causes of this tendency and secondly, it will provide some proper solutions to improve this situation.
On the one hand, the main reason that museums and historical sites are frequently visited by those who are foreigners is due to people’s curiosity. This means that people are extremely accustomed to internal cultures and traditions in their own country and have a strong interest in observing external characteristics, which they have not encountered before. For instance, recent research showed that 80% of individuals who already visited local historical sites tend to visit overseas to fulfill their satisfaction, which has many opportunities to explore new cultural backgrounds. This results in a poorer number of guests who willingly visit local museums or historical sites.
On the other hand, several solutions should be taken into consideration to deal with this issue. First, local people should receive a discount when visiting local museums and historical sites. This is illustrated by the fact that in some parts of the world, the price of a museum ticket for local citizens is half of that for foreigners, and also totally free for local children and students. Second, museums and historical sites should be reinvented or redecorated in their appearance in an attempt to change people’s attitudes towards aged historical buildings or features.
In conclusion, although local historical areas or museums can be uninteresting because being too familiar to local people, proper solutions can have a great impact on improving this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53183520599 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98475320602 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1343707586 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378570011258 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164114957429 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109347026738 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234055788717 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448875318879 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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